After the crit I was informed that I need to sort out a few areas with my tags. one of which was quite simply the type, it needed to be bigger and the copy right symbol smaller. Like so:
On the left is the original (s) and on the right (m) is the improved from a distance you can see that the writing is a lot more legible
This is the original in big
I was also told that I should mess around with the size icon, per haps make the type smaller and work with the layout.
I found that after having a play around, using a thinner type weight It looked a lot better than it did with the bold
This is what the new improved cards look like
With the set:
The next step is experimenting with print.
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